From: "Tara Miller, Tricia Quigley,Keely Wolter" rudy@rebelmail.anoka.k12.mn.us To: georgecassutto@hotmail.com Subject: World War 2 essay Date: Wed, 4 Oct 1995 13:58:29 +0000 HI Jason, Jakey, & Doug! We are here to critique your essay on World War 2. First of all we want to tell you we thoroughly enjoyed your essay. You did a very good job backing your opinions with facts. The third paragraph was very well written. We thought that you put in alot dates and that really helped to put the situation into perspective. We felt the third paragraph had many strong pionts that could be carried on in the rest of the paper. We thought that you could have used more of your own opinions, we found the second paragraph hard to follow. You needed a better topic senence and better explainations in the second paragraph. We really did enjoy your essay, we laughed, we cried, we lied! Just joking. Sincerley- 3 chicas from Minnesota ! Tara Miller Keely Wolter Tricia Quigley